Review Detail of SoulCore876 in The Extra's Return
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Honestly I can see potential for this story but there are glaring flaws from the chapters I have read up to so far, chapter 16 that is. The author keeps switching pronouns of genders, they would describing a character as a he but not even a few sentences later they'll call them a she. Plus there was one time the MC hit his maid for being disrespectful towards him, but straight away on the next chapter that maid is now a butler. I highly suggest the author to proofread through their chapters once or twice before uploading/publishing it on Webnovel.
The Extra's Return
Munruel
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That is a very meaningful review. I will continue to make improvements as best as I can. If you don't mind, you can also directly comment on paragraphs where there are pronoun errors or differences in the pronunciation of a term (not as if govern), I would be very grateful if you did. Thanks and happy reading. [img=recommend]
Munruel:That is a very meaningful review. I will continue to make improvements as best as I can. If you don't mind, you can also directly comment on paragraphs where there are pronoun errors or differences in the pronunciation of a term (not as if govern), I would be very grateful if you did. Thanks and happy reading. [img=recommend]
Munruel:That is a very meaningful review. I will continue to make improvements as best as I can. If you don't mind, you can also directly comment on paragraphs where there are pronoun errors or differences in the pronunciation of a term (not as if govern), I would be very grateful if you did. Thanks and happy reading. [img=recommend]