Review Detail of robertibrown93x in One Piece: Poor Luck

From what I've read I think this fanfic has potential, But I would of liked to know that this was about a mc with a system before I started reading. You should probably add a "system" tag to go with the rest of your current tags. ps. System fics are done way to often, and tend to make for a poor fanfic. But from what I've seen so far from this fic your doing pretty good, I only hope it continues to go as well as it has.