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Ah, it's not something bad enough that you need to apologize for. I just have bad experiences from other fanfic writers that I feel do these kinda things on purpose. But I don't think you're one of them. All I can do is ask is that you take my review, as I intended so you can try and add the corresponding tags to this fanfic and/or your future fanfics.
well, since he was a soldier in this world ever since the civil war he technically was working for the government before vaugnt was even a thing, just like he said. Especially since he was a soldier in his previous life as well.
........Just kidding . . . . Or am I?
Soo, You're fine with me ordering the hit after you get that college degree? Because I got a guy on standby....
My man Tony needs a patent stat!
True, but it's not the same as doing it with two blood related sisters at the same time.
darkseid is the new god of tyranny, if I'm remembering right. which means he is technically not the' god of evil'.
I'm pretty sure the author meant that comment as a figure of speech.
I love this fanfic. it's got quality writing ,and it has no grammar mistakes, or at the very least I haven't noticed any. It even has a MC that has its own (detailed) villain origin story written into the fanfic. If I had to pick out something I don't like about this fanfic it's that the author has added other comicbook universes and/or characters from said comicbook universes, as well as anime universes and there characters...now I don't crossovers, but I would expect the author to have created tags for all the different comicbook worlds/universes, and/or anime worlds/ universes; like for example the author currently has added a marvel comics character (black Widow), as well as a Dragonball/DBZ character (Son Goku), and both have their respective backstories ( I don't know if their back stories are exactly the same as their original universes backstories).But despite them being added to the fanfic; there are no tags to notify the readers.
I always find funny how hypocritical heroes and law enforcement are in comic books and fanfiction based on them. like it's okay for them to kill and/or cripple the people they are fighting, but when it happens to them or one of their own; it's suddenly not allowed and then they're all out for blood.
Or, I could use my preferred image of Wanda..that I think is better, to substitute the author preferred image in my head while I am reading his work. I only posted what I did to share my opinion.
this pic is better than the one the author chose, at least in my opinion
especially with the Grey and/or white hair.
In the pic you chosen she looks hella old comepared to the mc... . was that intentional?