Review Detail of TreacherousVoid in Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller
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Ok so its a cool story but here are some downsides to it. The MC has the power of immortality which is cool BUT he can also “ressurect” anyone he wants to. For me this just makes everything pointless, an MC that cant struggle or experience loss is just a waste of time for me (the author states he is tired of over dramatic novels so he wants to make one where the MC can live freely) Another issue for me is precisely this, the MCs happy go lucky attitude is just once again not very interesting to read. I dont need nor do I want an edge lord MC, i want a realistic and relatable one. Not a naive child who was given power over life and death running amok lol Other than those 2-3 points the novel is pretty good. If it werent for those things id have given this a full 4 stars easy. (P.S. the MC bringing up how “smart” he is gets annoying lol)
Immortal Spider Man: Multiverse Traveller
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Personally yes, but im just some random reader lol If i were you id put a poll in the comments section. Make a chapter specifically for it.
Nyxio:Sorry bout that xD I will stop doing the “smart” thing haha. About the ressurection power…MC hasn’t used it yet so do you think it should be removed?
TreacherousVoid:Personally yes, but im just some random reader lol If i were you id put a poll in the comments section. Make a chapter specifically for it.
The resurrection isn't that big of a deal as long as it isn't free. Just any kind of nerf. Also, you can read for the adventure and the collection of abilities, not his struggles. Further more, I find the immortality pretty interesting because there's hardly any stories where the main character lives for a long time without it all just being skipped over.