Review Detail of TheDeathmail in Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body

Item: Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body
Rating: 1.2

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TheDeathmailLv131yrTheDeathmail

Honestly, it's not the cookie cutter plot that's the problem... it's how it's so forced... he knows he needs to be low key.... but chooses not to be... doesn't leave the sect... and leaves such easy clues I don't get why he's not killed already.... he's reincarnated but doesn't properly take advantage of that to the point that the reincarnation is pointless... it's like the author just wanted this system and then forces the cookie cutter plot.... and how bad is it you ask??? Author has him cleans his marrows with a pill while already having a cleansing system....

Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body

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DaoistZdxwmtLv11DaoistZdxwmt

he gains nothing but a target on his back by staying in the sect. also his cultivation is so fast its even less important to join a sect. he should have used the mission to fake his death actually, so he would have even less ties to the sect.

1yr

DaoistZdxwmtLv11DaoistZdxwmt

yeah he should have let himself be expelled from the sect then just been a hermit. anything he needed he could have received from the merchant pavilion, if he purified everything he could make money super quickly.

1yr

TheDecanterLv1TheDecanter

Except that the author is incapable of doing something original and hence relies on this "sect setting" to make it easier for flat characters to exist.

DaoistZdxwmt:he gains nothing but a target on his back by staying in the sect. also his cultivation is so fast its even less important to join a sect. he should have used the mission to fake his death actually, so he would have even less ties to the sect.

1yr