Review Detail of Osicheri in Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed

Everything is top notch, wether it is world buidling, writing quality, story flow and developement. I will say that updates are too slow. The only damn thing holding this back is the tedious amount of POVs. At the start it was pretty good as a good majority of the story was on the mc with some POV changes to give the story more diversity and life. BUT GAD DAMNNN BRO, its getting ridiculous now, I swear that for 10 chapters we get around 2-3 chapters for the MC. Like what?? I’m not here to read about those random kids story, this shit is making me dislike them (I dont mind pov changes to their perspective but not this much). Please author, focus more on the mc, we want to see how he schemes his way back to the top, the impact he will make on the Gu world, his legacy, proper things. Man, the fanfic is actually good tho, just so disappointed with the author’s way of storytelling. Anyway if what I said doesn’t bother you in the slightest, read the story, you’ll enjoy it plenty.