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Osicheri27dReplied to Fersuremaybe_kBecause only golden core cultivators can enter the fallen immortal realm. How is he going to explain or prove that he obtained a longevity fruit that is actually extinct? He is only a foundation cultivator. That would be highly suspicious
"I'm just a Foundation Establishment cultivator; it seems inappropriate to hand it over now."- Osicheri6mthReplied to Ancient_
Gotta be inclusive lol
"Men and women of the sixth legion," Sarah said, her voice echoing throughout the grand hall. "The Ancestor has given an order!" - Osicheri8mthPosted
Everything is top notch, wether it is world buidling, writing quality, story flow and developement. I will say that updates are too slow. The only damn thing holding this back is the tedious amount of POVs. At the start it was pretty good as a good majority of the story was on the mc with some POV changes to give the story more diversity and life. BUT GAD DAMNNN BRO, its getting ridiculous now, I swear that for 10 chapters we get around 2-3 chapters for the MC. Like what?? I’m not here to read about those random kids story, this shit is making me dislike them (I dont mind pov changes to their perspective but not this much). Please author, focus more on the mc, we want to see how he schemes his way back to the top, the impact he will make on the Gu world, his legacy, proper things. Man, the fanfic is actually good tho, just so disappointed with the author’s way of storytelling. Anyway if what I said doesn’t bother you in the slightest, read the story, you’ll enjoy it plenty.
- Osicheri9mthPosted
A pretty good story overall, unfortunately quite the amount of grammar mistakes, thought it isn’t to the point of being unreadable, but still distracts a bit from the reading. The universe and world building is pretty interesting and as I was reading I wanted to know more of the races, planets and general lore of this universe. The system is a mixed bag for me, the main issue being that its not expained enough, like why does it detoxify all poisons? why does it reject every mental abilities that is used on the mc? those advantages make the system at times feel too op for no reason at all, which substract from the enjoyment of this story. For me what made me stop reading this story, is the fake villainous mc for me ( there is poison in the story at times). Id say he is more of a very dark anti-hero than a villain. small spoilers ahead: Like the point that made me drop the story is that a gladiator that betrayed him earlier in the story dies later on, but because the death wasn’t honorable enough (like wtf? Seriously thats the reason hes mad??) he gets mad at the ennemy and wants to take revenge. Or that earlier in the story he saves a group of people because it wouldn’t pose an issue to him. Certain actions of him made me question each time if he truly is a self-centered villain or juste a very twisted anti-hero. Anyway the story isn’t bad per se, just disappointing at times. Read if everything I said wouldn’t bother you.
- Osicheri9mthCommented
Didnt you say that he will have no friends and be self centered? this reaction is far from that. The more Im reqding the less I think Lenny is a villain. A bit disappointed to be honest, I thought he would be more cruel and selfish than he actually is. I mean heck, Id is even say he is more of a anti-hero than villain.
He had activated his ability on D455 to its maximum, but it was of no use. The D455 was like an immovable tank. - Osicheri9mthReplied to Dere_Isaac
I do remember but you stated that killing him allowed him to get to C class not directly to B.
Crusher gave Lenny a few punches to the face, and Lenny bled badly. Blood mixed with saliva poured out of his mouth. - Osicheri9mthCommented
Why would he care avout that? Isnt he a self centered villain ?? Those kind kind of decision make me doubt if he truly is a villain…
However, Lenny was not yet done: "There will no longer be rape of any kind. Anyone is allowed to refuse sex as long as they want to. Of course, I will not prevent the use of one's body for points. How a person wishes to use his own body will be at his own discretion. Lovers may love, and haters may hate. However, my word is law." And if anyone has anything to say against it, they should step forward now!" - Osicheri9mthCommented
Bro its getting ridiculous, lenny has C class strength where did the B class come from?? You keep forgetting those things, its actually worsening the story.
Crusher gave Lenny a few punches to the face, and Lenny bled badly. Blood mixed with saliva poured out of his mouth. - Osicheri9mthReplied to ThunderTaters
Feeling like a man doesnt make you a man.
"Please stop, sister. A man has his pride." - Osicheri9mthReplied to Mr_Babbles
You need to go back to school, the paragraph was well put together grammatic ally
There was a time, there were people called me the rat king. Which I liked very much. It might be offensive to others. But to me, this name was more meaningful than the name my parents gave me. - Osicheri9mthReplied to Otis_Atis
I mean its quite original a prideful arrogant psycho mc that isnt a copy of Fang Yuan.
He raised his foot and ruthlessly and violently stamped down on the face of the girl. Still stained with tears and a pitiful look on her sad little face, Qing Fang's foot smashed down repeatedly. After a while, this girl was no longer small, pitiful and cute but a mangled and unrecognisable pool of flesh and blood. - Osicheri1yrPosted
- Osicheri1yrReplied to GifflarGod
Who cares
"I am Ximen Wei, a force to be reckoned with, a conqueror of worlds. My journey into the unknown is not a mere walk, it's a declaration of war against mediocrity. With each step, I stride towards ultimate power, a power that will shake the foundations of the Divine Star Continent. - Osicheri1yrReplied to GifflarGod
That makes it more unique tho.
As Ximen Wei considered his options, he realized that the people in this world were not his own, and that he was merely a stranger passing through. This thought gave him a newfound sense of detachment, and he felt a strange sense of detachment from the people around him. - Osicheri1yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1 - Qi World!
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- Osicheri2yrReplied to Mark_Anthony_1
You are fkin annoying, always complaining about everything.
Her eyes shined with determination. "No, my lord… I, Hua Yulan, came to this city willingly to search for my fellow sisters and Prince Jian is the one who agreed to help me. In exchange, I have chosen him; my body, mind, and spirit belong to him forever. How can my lord steal something that is already his?"