Review Detail of Juan_Cardenas_8016 in Rebirth of Abium- The Core of Itera

great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised. Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read. other than that great job author, keep it up