Review Detail of dottore in 主张 主张

The writing is... well, to put it nicely, confusing. To put it brutally, just horrible. Punctuations need work, I don't think I've seen an actual quotation mark so far. The story is an amazing concept, but it is badly written. The author said he enjoys a bit of mystery, but don't you think there's too much mystery at this point? I suggest downloading Grammarly to help with the minor mistakes. The descriptions as well, they're vague. I could barely visualize what's happening. Sigh, I really hope you could try and neaten up the writing. It was an interesting concept but alas.