Review Detail of glass_explosions in Flower On The Ash

The story, although seems fast-paced, would definitely be a wonderful read for whoever is into these kinds of novel plots. At first, the author had me feeling very bad for the main character, but the way all the events and everything in general sped up so quickly like that kind of threw me off. This would definitely become an amazing novel if there was some more illustration and more spread-out events. Otherwise, keep up the great work :)