Review Detail of Dehni_Olsen in Flower On The Ash

I love stories that start off like this. Character design was great. They have much depth. I can see them growing into very active and vivid characters. I would like to see a little more descriptive words for their features however. The flow of the chapters were very good. It didn’t jump around and we also got to read the ML side of the story, which is stellar. At times the author does skip from 1st and 3rd point of view and there are a few word errors but it was not enough to pull me from my immersion. Very good start!