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Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

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DetachedDreamer
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I may delete this review for a new one later on but starting from the beginning I've found the MC very unlikable. His first strike is when he questioned if he should save a random dying woman even tho he's basically a God. He's scared to reveal his powers even to weakling nobody's as well. The whole hiding your powers and being neutral morally trope is old and overused on WN. This character is a pile of cliche and so far its pretty boring. I havent given up on the story but I feel I've already grasped the childish nature of the authors writing style. I would love to see a fanfic explore no game no life but we will see if I can even make it to that arc.

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Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

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genisis_gaia_boss
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... your description is in fact jumbled.... in the novel itself he was stated to save her because of morality, THEN because she was beautiful did he actually take her in.... to the writer of this review, here's my stance : So if there are these super powerful entities, One of which even allowed you to awaken your Hax the first place, would you not be scared? also at the time he didn't hold enough strength to counter entities like Muzan to... if you was seeing as a threat he definitely would have been killed. I also personally don't know what's wrong with a peaceful MC, but hey that's just your opinion and I can't really say anything against that.

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
NatsuTempest
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thanks for saying this now I will not have to read the story because 1 of the things that always make me drop a story is usually when mc wants to hide their power or want a peaceful life

MarinXGrayfia
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me 2

NatsuTempest:thanks for saying this now I will not have to read the story because 1 of the things that always make me drop a story is usually when mc wants to hide their power or want a peaceful life
Daoistangel10
Daoistangel10Lv4Daoistangel10

Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man

Drurlulu
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that's somehow worse, your description of the mc feels like he's a Chinese MC

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
OtakuSad0
OtakuSad0Lv3OtakuSad0

tried to explain and only made the situation worse hahaha

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Nyx_04
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Eso es aun peor 🤣

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
raizell24
raizell24Lv4raizell24

bruh

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
WELDNAVA_D_CREATOR
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Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
brawl_9549
brawl_9549Lv12brawl_9549

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man
Na1gel
Na1gelLv4Na1gel

that.... he just whent from chinese villian in my head to japan hentai villian with chinese behavior ? xD .... you made this way worse xD .... fist i thought maybe il give it a try anyways but then i scrolled to ur comment and became like nah bruh

Daoistangel10:Dude he is not hiding he just doesn’t care about her and he did save her just becouse he noticed that she is a beautiful 😍 read the book before you decide man