Review Detail of AbysmalYandere in My Magical Harem System
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First of all, this isn't harem or polygamy. the protagonist wants to remain monogamous while his clones do it in bed with their own lovers. the clones are not in absolute similarity and do not have a real connection of clone with the portagonist so they are considered own characters, that the clones get their own women do not make this novel harem. This such solution of the clones seems to me the most vague solution that I could have chosen from the great diversity that I could have chosen, also the title has harem as well as the labels but which character has a harem really? the portagonist doesn't have it, the clones have their own lovers and I don't think the protagonist will mess with them. It feels like you put up a sign that says you sell melon to give me a couple of lemons instead, the only thing similar is the name, not much more, this novel is something like that. This review was made by reading all the comments I could find and when reading until chapter 11, I do not know what the Author will do in the future but luck. This is not my cup of tea but I see that there are many people who really do not like harem but they liked the novel itself so this would be perfect for them, as for me, it leaves a bad taste in my mouth so I decided to stop at this time after publishing this review so that other people do not think that this is really harem, in any case it would be something like a fake harem. If I am wrong about what I comment I would like you to clarify it with another review or with a response to this review, thank you. The novel is decent and has room for improvement, good luck Author.
My Magical Harem System
Mister_Op
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The main character will have a harem. The reason he made Lance is to farm LPs more efficiently without his constant efforts. He will look for higher quality women for his harem.
FunnyBuns:So the Main Character won't have a harem but his clone will. Man this is a dumpster fire.image
Hello First, thanks for asking me to explain and not simply bombard me with insults for letting down your expectations. I realize Ardor’s solution for the Condition 3 of his Ultimate Mission made it impossible for him to have a harem, in a general sense of the word. But this “is” a harem novel, and we cannot have that, can we? So, I will still introduce Harem in the novel, most likely through a clone. Do not think of them as paper figures. They have own unique points that make them genuine characters, kinda like a novel with Multiple Protagonists, or Multiple Male Leads. You will still get to enjoy the harem novel, with elements added that make it unique from other harem novels, hopefully in a good way. But as they say, it takes time for things to happen, and it will take some time for the “proper harem” to appear (I will add a note in the synopsis to let the readers know this). But the harem is near, I assure you.
Mister_Op:Hello First, thanks for asking me to explain and not simply bombard me with insults for letting down your expectations. I realize Ardor’s solution for the Condition 3 of his Ultimate Mission made it impossible for him to have a harem, in a general sense of the word. But this “is” a harem novel, and we cannot have that, can we? So, I will still introduce Harem in the novel, most likely through a clone. Do not think of them as paper figures. They have own unique points that make them genuine characters, kinda like a novel with Multiple Protagonists, or Multiple Male Leads. You will still get to enjoy the harem novel, with elements added that make it unique from other harem novels, hopefully in a good way. But as they say, it takes time for things to happen, and it will take some time for the “proper harem” to appear (I will add a note in the synopsis to let the readers know this). But the harem is near, I assure you.
I feel like an idiot for not reading the reviews as this I also didn't like it after reading that chapter. Truthfully after reading all the author's comments the whole thing is too convoluted. Instead of making a harem normally he seems to have used mental gymnastics to reach the same point based on what he said in other comments. Taking hundreds of unnecessary and even detrimental steps to reach the same point is just a sign of not knowing what you are doing.
Okay thank God, you really had me worried with those clones. The way you wrote it was basically saying a clone made differently. I don't mind him existing to farm LP, I also don't really like multiple protagonists NGL, I mean I don't mind the clones being important side characters but that as long as the main focus is Ardor. Though I also hope he doesn't share women with Lance, like Lance got that maid Minnie or whatever so I hope she stays Lance's. I wish this would have been explained better but I get you're probably new to writing.
Mister_Op:The main character will have a harem. The reason he made Lance is to farm LPs more efficiently without his constant efforts. He will look for higher quality women for his harem.