Review Detail of ArifuretaForever in Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun

will there be a chiss in the harem, ive never seen someone have a chiss

couldve written a good star wars fic but instead you wrote garbage you freak

Before I read it tell me what’s wrong with it

if you like mid tier writing and harems then read it. but i genuinely think all harem fics should be deleted as they arent good especially seeing as they always take place in worlds it wouldnt fit

You can try The reincarnator's tavern by gnomebob, it's an awesome star wars fic........

It's on hiatus btw

Would suggest slowing down the chapters dont want another good fic to get abandoned because the author got burnt out. As much as I enjoy the multiple chapters a day slow it down would much rather a complete story at a slower pace than a story with multiple chapters a day and abandoned.

To the author, don’t take that guy comment to heart. A quick look at the comment history shows that he needs help. Telling people to kill themselves and all. To the guy I replied to, you should really take a look at the kind of things you say and how people may receive it. You really really need help.

i mean what i say, and the author should khs 😁 id love to watch

Like your father did after your mom cheated on him?

so close to being a good joke, if only your werent projecting

Yeah it was a joke the wh*re screaming, she should do it better

Do you have a patreon?

I do not.

are you going to get one possibly in the future

Not sure. But I'll look into it.

OK that sucks well I am excited for more chapters

Do you have a discord server author??? I think it would be good place to send some of the pics and we reader's can also get notifications when you release chapters

How large will the harem be?

Whats the actual plot here and what time period is this set in?