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The story isn't bad, but the plot holes are huge... Why is Sirius looking for Horrocrux? How did he find out? you skipped most of the dialogue and conversations that should be part of the story. Did they question your knowledge of why you know about horcruxes? Also, it seems that there was a kind of pause on the part of the author of 6 months? and then there are only incompressible jumps in time where things happen that are not reported, leaving much of what happens to the imagination... Bruh I don't mind the fluff but I think focusing on those huge plot holes would make the most sense.

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HP: Eagle Soars

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