Review Detail of Turquoise24 in The Story About me and The Girl who Asked me out

Nice work. I read the initial chapters and I'm surely gonna read them all. The plot, the backstory and the characters are all well-built. Personally, I am a fan of revenge stories. And your story is kinda realistic. It doesn't matter who plays with others' feelings first. But, what should people do when they get betrayed. Revenge is the first thing that comes to mind. And you know what. When your first scar is your first love, then it doesn't matter how many came after that, because you'll never gonna love them anyways.