Review Detail of UnKnownEntity001 in Game of Thrones: Orphan

I got to about chaoter 5 and had to drop it. All the characters are OOC, they don’t feel like the actual characters at all. And the MC is pathetic. I’m not sure how long the story focuses on him being a child but I have no interest in reading about a child mc that is average in every way possible. Usually the early chapters are used to hook readers….these were just boring. The only slightly interesting part was the whole criminal gang stuff. Everything else was lackluster in every way possible. I like your other GoT fic but this one just falls short. Good luck author.