Review Detail of Karil in The Innkeeper

A great story with nice pacing. The worldbuilding is well thought out and It's a great take on getting the all powrful "system" cliché. The character lacks the trauma needed for character building but has enough of it to get more powerful. I suggest the author should take some pointers from "Supreme Magus" if they want to get better at that. The story points out from the start that our main character Isn't the biggest fish out there and won't be for a long time which i like. There are few grammatical errors that could be fixed by using a program made for that or by having someone review the chapters before publicationMy personal rating is 7.5/10overall, a great story.