Karil
Imagine a beautiful world where you can do anything you want... Now dip it in sh#t. This is where we live.
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Karil1mthCommentedWe all know this feeling all to well. When your life turned upside down so quickly that your only response is to acclimate quickly. To fundamentally change as a person even before you fully matured. And if you haven't felt that yet. Be happy that you have a good life. Be grateful. Someone always has it worse than you.
It was almost like all of this hadn't happened.- Karil1mthCommented
Time to spend a hefty sum on sudden death precautions!
"I remember that there are also some low-level passive spells that can slightly increase toughness…" - Karil1mthCommented
Beautiful.
Second. Live freely, be true to yourself, and cherish the bonds of family that tie us together. That's the whole point, right? - Karil1mthCommented
The will of the whole colony.
Though of course, such submission is impossible when a stronger will is already in place. - Karil1mthCommented
Domain expansion.
The Well spreads out to cover a kilometre in all directions within an instant. - Karil1mthCommented
This here kids, is what we call foreshadowing.
All I did was create a gravity well with the highest amount of mana, which I condensed to the highest point and then pumped it full of energy from the Altar. What could possibly happen? - Karil2mthCommented
Awwwww. The demons are cute.
Not that these demons are likely to submit. I don't know what it is that their 'god' is doing to them, but they have gone completely loco. The intelligent, obsession-focused monsters are gone, replaced by these slavering hounds, desperate to enact his will. It's depressing if I'm honest. The demons might be a bit nuts most of the time, but I like them. They're weird. - Karil3mthPosted
Literally just an overcomplicated story about Thesius with a lot of Xianxia plot points and horrors mixed inbetween. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. There are a lot of grammatical errors after chapter 900 but at this point you will be too hooked on reading this piece of art. Oh and also "Lord of the misteries" readers will get their PTSD triggered when reading this. Especially when it comes to the description of the moon. Most of, if not all the characters have depth to them, even the side characters. It updates regularly. The worldbuilding and story development are top notch although the beggining of the antarctica arc is taxing on the mind. This story gets a solid 9/10 from me.
- Karil5mthPosted
A great story with nice pacing. The worldbuilding is well thought out and It's a great take on getting the all powrful "system" cliché. The character lacks the trauma needed for character building but has enough of it to get more powerful. I suggest the author should take some pointers from "Supreme Magus" if they want to get better at that. The story points out from the start that our main character Isn't the biggest fish out there and won't be for a long time which i like. There are few grammatical errors that could be fixed by using a program made for that or by having someone review the chapters before publicationMy personal rating is 7.5/10overall, a great story.
- Karil5mthReplied to YellowNarwhale
No sore spot hit there friend, you don't need to imply that something is wrong with me because I don't like artists who can't take criticism. It's insulting and someone else could get angry for that. Nonetheless you're right, my review was based sorely on the fact that the author doesn't take criticism. I will read the whole story and point out the good and the bad things in it and if there is no redeeming points in it, I will utterly crush it. I know that It's hard for someone to do their thing and be criticised when they are trying their best but I stand by the point that It's the only thing that makes us strive for greatness. There is no point for affirmation if a person can't better themselves by listening to the bad rhings people think about their things. ESPECIALLY when it comes to art.
- Karil5mthReplied to Once_
My man, my thinking was completly Innocent when I was writing it because That's hiw it was for me when I was younger. Don't make it weird.
Raaz was still on cloud nine, so he didn't make any question about the oddly big sizes Lith had requested. He could have easily made it much thinner and shorter, making it easier to carry around. But Lith refused the proposal, begging his father to fulfill his wish. - Karil5mthCommented
Safety, laughs and food? Sounds like a *shadow* of the past.
"But there were no monsters in the castle! Instead, it was full of people. I think… no, I'm sure that they were Awakened. Some were guarding the walls, some were going about their lives without a care in the world. There was food, safety, and laughter!" - Karil5mthCommented"Odysseus was the first human to break the will of gods."
- Karil5mthReplied to SpacecookIt was weathered and narrow, barely enough for two people to walk side by side. The path wasn't paved, but rather cut from the black rock by some unknown tool or magic, winding its way up the mountain like a tail of a sleeping dragon. Here and there, it was hidden beneath the snow. But most importantly, it was flat. Sunny had never been that happy to see something flat in his life.
- Karil7mthReplied to Pugatron
My man. Warn people before you spoil stuff for them.
Titus saw the looks on their faces and it acknowledged it with a nod even as his heart sank in his chest. This was always the hardest part….. - Karil7mthReplied to Pheonix_1207
Good point. I didn't think of this at the time.
By the evening of the second day they returned to the nest in triumph! Both of them settled in to evolve to the fourth tier where they would begin their lives as egg producing Queens of the colony. There was quite a lot of energy amongst the nest at that, I have to say. A great deal of excitement and anticipation. It felt as if the very first Formica Sapiens colony had reached a major milestone of producing our first home grown egg laying Queens.