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Blazzing18
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I just got done with the newest chapter and everything is looking really good so far but while I was reading it I was just thinking back to when the MC and his friends where getting all of the contacts from all of the higher beings and honestly I think the MC should have had his 2 friends back away with the other then release all his aura and the have him have a ball of each element floating behind him with his eyes red and his nail and hands tuned into knifes and have him become basically demonic and have him floating saying hes going to kill all of them just for thinking this way a show and to mess with peoples lifes like this and all that and have him start going after one of them but only to have him mom and aunt come out before him and have him kinda tell them if they dont wish to die they will move now and all that havw have his mother look at him with interest and sadness and have his aunt just be her but scenes the didnt happen y not have something like this happen before he goes off to see the celestial being thing that he supposed to go see but have have all of his wifes and maids and aunts and lovers and basically the hole royal clan come out to stop him and to have everything blocked and only have his wifes and maids aunts and lovers be able to talk with and maybe have a fight break out or something between him and his wife and aunts and lovers scenes his maids cant hurt him and this after its done have them all go back to the castle and wait for him to be up and have them all talk to him and figure out what happened and all that only to have everyone know about the other world and everything and maybe have it be his subconsciousness, and consciousness doing weird things or whatever or have it so that all of his memories from there start to finally fade away and he doesnt remember after he talks to them or something... Im sure U THE AUTHOR can come up with something better then what I did... but I think this would be an epic chapter or couple chapters with how it would go and how they would feel and see him and be able to tell something was wrong and it would be after everyone ascends to the next rank and when it happens have it so that everyone can feel the MCs aura but maybe not be effected by it this way they can tell how strong he is and everything more then just his own rank and for the ones that r on the same rank or around there and r not supremes they have to stand to the side with the maids to cover them and protect them as they watch if they can handle it like his cousin and maybe his sister too if she cant handle it but she should be able too... U THE AUTHOR would have to put in the details and everything but it would be really cool to be able to see this befor ehe gose and even before he spends time with his wifes and lovers and everyone and this way he cannhave time with them and even settle his own being after something like happens and maybe have him remember what happened but he couldnt stop because he was so mad or because the halo effected him while he was thinking of something sad or whatever or his old world or whatever and if u dont have his memories from his old world stat to vanish then at least have him tell everyone when he wakes up and have everyone at the castle waiting for him to be up and maybe seeing everyone there when he wakes up have him try to run or something but before he can have his mother stop him and have him start to explain where he lost it to his mother and have his other world stuff slip from his tongue this way he has to explain it to everybody but he dont have to go into details like he did with his mother but not be really vague about it either!! like this would definitely be and epic couple of chapters.... I really hope u use it!!

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SocialHippo
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I’ll do my best to live up to your expectations, but no promises :p

Blazzing18
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no worries.... It was just an Idea even if it was put in the book its not a big deal... I just thought it could be a really cool couple of chapters and this would give the MC a perfect time to tell all of the girls his past by having it slip out or just come out and say it... and it could be a perfect example of Y not to accumulate too much bad karma because the halo could do whatever it want...

SocialHippo:I’ll do my best to live up to your expectations, but no promises :p