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Review Detail of ChaoticOrder in Vampire's Slice Of Life

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ChaoticOrder
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I should start by saying I like this novel inspite of its many glaring flaws. Most of the s*x scenes are well done, and the novel started very strong and honestly stayed that way up until after the wedding arc and only really started falling apart around chapter 900 with this cooking quest/arc, but I will speak more of that later. Many, if not all, of the problems that I have with the series stems from the Author forgetting things that happened earlyier in the book, or getting over ambitious and including too much and straying away from the core of the story. Infact I feel like that is the biggest complaint I have. Why is it that in Vampire's Slice of Life, we have to have some annoying conspiracy happening in the world, timeskips that seem to be unreasonably long for no reason (trippling the MC's age) and have the MC persue cultivation like no tomorrow? To add onto that, the MC is a reincarnator (which is fine) but their is also a regressor who has a system, a bunch of other worlds/cultivation types, gods, and Chosen Ones too. Oh and the MC just gets a system too and never even touches it or uses it. The majority of the time this novel feels like a weird mash of cultivation plus chaos, and all of the best chapters are the ones that actually feel like Slice of Life. I think my favorite arc was the Elven arc because of this. I even like the training arcs (when they arent just timeskipped because why would we include that slice of life content) and this includes the breif bit where Lith was in the Chi world. I feel like the Author needs to sit down and actually reread through the story so far.

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I appreciate your criticism and am really glad you read this far. Yes, there have been a shift of focus and things seem a bit chaotic and mis-matched. From the start, vsol was all about slice of life and even later in the story, it was all about that. However, around 900-1000 chapter mark, there's some major developments and the plots picking up pace. I personally felt that readers were bored of the slice of life. some even asked me to fasten the plot a bit. hence, I did that. Another important thing was that I was unable to write slice of life for a while. There's been a lack of inspirations, and I felt that I might as well move the plot line instead. Anywho, I appreciate you reading this far, and taking time out to write a review. I have heard your concerns and I'll work into improving my craft as much as possible. If there's anything more you'd like to tell me, please do so on the discord. I hope you have a good day! :D