Review Detail of RaiyAkumu in The Last Twila

Yep second review here, Just wanted to point some things out. This time My rating is a 3.8 instead of a 3.4. I think that my writing has improved a tiny bit since my first review. I would like to say to all of those out there looking for a story, and to those of you who have already read this story, I have paused this story so I can try to set myself up to attempt to publish a chapter every day. Please treat this review as a Q&A I understand the plot is slightly confusing, so if there is anything you are dying to have explained please reply to this review. It may be a month before I upload a new chapter. I appreciate all of you who have read my story and stayed loyal despite the fact I update rarely twice a week. Thanks Again, and sorry to those of you who hate authors who rate their own stories, I try to be honest.