Review Detail of Gabichu_Yeah in Do NOT Let The ROB Become The Dimensional Chat Group Admin!!!
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The author ignores the comments? I understand that you want to be innovative and all that, but I don't understand what's going on here. Everything is random and the author seems to assume that we are aware of the different facts of what happens and the different dialogues, which are also unnecessarily complicated, just use the quotes like the rest of the webnovel. I'll be back if there's a consistent rewrite
Do NOT Let The ROB Become The Dimensional Chat Group Admin!!!
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Door-kun, he was talking about chapter 1. Ishigami Yu's flash back. These one: Well if you want to stay in school, you're going to have to write a reflection and keep up with your homework. WHAT'S WITH THAT SULKY LOOK?! YOU REALIZE I'M GOING OUT OF MY WAY TO MAKE TIME FOR YOU, RIGHT? YOU'RE JUST GETTING WHAT YOU DESERVE! IF YOU HADN'T DONE SOMETHING SO CRAZY... YOU'RE ALREADY FIFTEEN, AND you CAN'T EVEN MUSTER A SINGLE "I'M SORRY"?! PS: He thinks it was an actual dialogue. PPS: If any of you are reading this, those are actually just a flashback. Someone talking to him from his memories, I think.
No, I don't ignore comments. I just went to sleep right after publishing. And no, the story itself makes sense if you actually pay to read the story. The lines came from the phantom thieves always had their names and then their code names in a bracket, quotation marks always differentiate which are spoken by which, and even if it did have parts where it just stacks whole dialogues without any exposition, it'll probably just the banter scene or unimportant parts. What makes people confused is probably NOT the dialogue, it's the lore of the persona series. I can imagine not many knows what a Palace, Mementos, or what "stealing hearts" means in Persona 5.
No idea, I was talking about chapter 1, where I could see that I was not the only one disoriented. I haven't watched anime for years and I don't play games because they don't appeal to me, I don't see them on Youtube either, so in response to you, no, I have no idea about terms about current games (I know, persona 5 is not current but I don't like that type of games) Google translate
Door_kun:No, I don't ignore comments. I just went to sleep right after publishing. And no, the story itself makes sense if you actually pay to read the story. The lines came from the phantom thieves always had their names and then their code names in a bracket, quotation marks always differentiate which are spoken by which, and even if it did have parts where it just stacks whole dialogues without any exposition, it'll probably just the banter scene or unimportant parts. What makes people confused is probably NOT the dialogue, it's the lore of the persona series. I can imagine not many knows what a Palace, Mementos, or what "stealing hearts" means in Persona 5.
Gabichu_Yeah:No idea, I was talking about chapter 1, where I could see that I was not the only one disoriented. I haven't watched anime for years and I don't play games because they don't appeal to me, I don't see them on Youtube either, so in response to you, no, I have no idea about terms about current games (I know, persona 5 is not current but I don't like that type of games) Google translate
Heeeead:Door-kun, he was talking about chapter 1. Ishigami Yu's flash back. These one: Well if you want to stay in school, you're going to have to write a reflection and keep up with your homework. WHAT'S WITH THAT SULKY LOOK?! YOU REALIZE I'M GOING OUT OF MY WAY TO MAKE TIME FOR YOU, RIGHT? YOU'RE JUST GETTING WHAT YOU DESERVE! IF YOU HADN'T DONE SOMETHING SO CRAZY... YOU'RE ALREADY FIFTEEN, AND you CAN'T EVEN MUSTER A SINGLE "I'M SORRY"?! PS: He thinks it was an actual dialogue. PPS: If any of you are reading this, those are actually just a flashback. Someone talking to him from his memories, I think.