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Review Detail of Primordiales in My Hollywood System

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Primordiales
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The novel is fine, I like the direction, I just don't like the construction of characters, it's very simple and repetitive that it annoys me to read it, the romantic aspect was really rushed, there are many girls who can be FMC but you chose one in the first chapters that was super forced and now you hardly mention her, the best thing would have been for him to be single, enjoy his youth and marry a woman when he is already 30 years old, but what to do, I hope he changes this aspect because it is killing me with boredom

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My Hollywood System

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