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Primordiales

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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales2mth
    Commented

    Thanks

    Ch 3 I got Reborn!
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    Reborn in Mushoku Tensei with Unique Skill Great Sage
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales2mth
    Commented

    I like it but you can't do the system interns in normal letters because when I translate it to Spanish it doesn't translate for me please

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood
    Fantasy · DreamThree
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales2mth
    Commented

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    Ch 24 Emergency!!! Help needed!
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    Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales3mth
    Posted

    I like it.. The only thing I did not like about My system in Hollywood was that the protagonist became a very fast boyfriend, he is in Hollywood by God, who as a boy has not dreamed of sleeping (having sex) with stars there .. I get upset that the protagonist is with someone who is meh and doesn't have much development and fell in love in a month and a half during the shoot.. The majority of relationships like that do not work much in Hollywood, and those that work are exceptions since, one earns more than the other, jealousy comes there, also if the actor/triz is handsome/cute, jealousy always comes for the movies that they are going to film, because always but always in most movies there are hot kisses or scenes (sex, touch etc). And hence jealousy comes, infidelities, among many shady things .. The truth does not matter the romance in Hollywood very well, that's why it has to be casual relationships where everything is agreed, and they just enjoy themselves for a while and that's it, no strings attached, then when you already get tired will marry you with someone you see who is trustworthy, who will not betray you and above all that is not from Hollywood hahaha

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    Hollywood King
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales3mth
    Replied to Primordiales

    It is your story but it is a shame, there are many people from Hollywood who would be good that it was love interest and eye to have intimate contact or have sex, be friends with sex, with many women it is not harem ...

    Ch 111 Chapter 111
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    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales3mth
    Posted

    The novel is fine, I like the direction, I just don't like the construction of characters, it's very simple and repetitive that it annoys me to read it, the romantic aspect was really rushed, there are many girls who can be FMC but you chose one in the first chapters that was super forced and now you hardly mention her, the best thing would have been for him to be single, enjoy his youth and marry a woman when he is already 30 years old, but what to do, I hope he changes this aspect because it is killing me with boredom

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    My Hollywood System
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales3mth
    Posted

    ................................................soporífero m................1234*﷼฿ΩΩΩΩΩ i like munch nsmsksksnkesksknskskfkekwldnslnfkfnx........................ My nime is as Diego dogs

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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales4mth
    Posted

    57 chapters and we still don't see the protagonist's progress, the story is boring and smooth from chapter 37 onwards it's almost a copy of the canon just that with another character the very disappointing truth ..

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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Posted

    Es lo mismo sólo que con un personaje mas ... . . Esperaba algo mas pero bueno que se le va a hacer solo daré 2 estrellas por que me entretuve unos 3 minutos ..

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    [PLACEHOLDER FOR NEW STORY]
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Commented

    En capítulos anteriores tenia 250 de resistencia.. Por que ahora sólo tiene 230?

    Ch 35 Chapter 35
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    The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Replied to Tora_ryu

    Hello, you help me, you know how to solve this, it won't let me enter the link and I have no idea what to do, will you help me?

    Ch 2 2.1 Dungeon City, Orario
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    Gekai Gamer - Danmachi
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Commented

    Hello, you help me, you know how to solve this, it won't let me enter the link and I have no idea what to do, will you help me?

    Ch 2 2.1 Dungeon City, Orario
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    Gekai Gamer - Danmachi
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Replied to Primordiales

    I already made an account but it does not let in I do not know what to do :(

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    Gekai Gamer - Danmachi
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Posted

    Very good, I want to read in questionablequestiong but it won't let me what to do ?? :((( Help plisss ... .... .... ... .... Plisssss.... ..plisss

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    Gekai Gamer - Danmachi
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Posted

    Trash trash trash.... ........ ....... ...... ..... ..... ... ... .. .. Trash trash trash trash..... .... ... ... .... .... ... .......... .... Trash trash trash trash

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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales5mth
    Commented

    Entonces no escribas subnormal, si no te aguantas las critcas mo escribas, a nadie le importas demasiado, es un fanfic de bleach hay muchos por ahí y con mejores cosas que este de aqui, si no me gusta comentaré y ya, nadie me va a privar de mi opinion... Además si vas a crear la mitad de la historia con OC'S, entonces cambia el nombre de la historia por que hacer muchos ocs en una historia que tiene muchos personajes utilizables es simplemente otra historia diferente a bleach, que sea mas facil para ti no significa que sea del gusto de los demas... Comentario copiado por si lo borras así no me silencias como a muchos

    Ch -1 READ THIS!!!
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales6mth
    Commented

    friend, please no tory noo, to be honest, the tory actress is horrible in appearance, people overestimate her, the only thing worth her is her body, even that is not a big deal, plis no tory, I don't even like the personality in the script that Samantha gives her, it's rubbish... Well, since I've said my opinion, now I'm going with who I think I should be with ...... and it's Carmen, Miguel's mom XDDDD, to be honest I think she's the prettiest actress of cobra kai so far, I've seen the photos where she didn't have her hair done like in the show and 😋

    Ch 9 The war approaches.
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    Cobra Kai: A Great Fighter
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales1yr
    Commented

    Gu Yue..

    Ch 7 Potential parrings
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    Soul land 3: Era of the Tang Wei
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales1yr
    Posted

    You have to see the other fanfic to read this ???. . . . . . . ...... . . .... ...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳............ . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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    Re: Discovery
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  • Primordiales
    Primordiales1yr
    Commented

    How about himiko? I don't like jiro ..

    Ch 1 Handa Ren
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    Reborn in BNHA with an Ability of a Ghoul
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