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Review Detail of ChakrasTiger in Harry potter: A Slytherin''s Story

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*disclaimer* only read to chapter 2 as of writing this review. Pros: 1.intersting way of adding system into the story 2.the system is nice and simple(hate overly complicated systems especially talking ones) Cons: 1.quite a few spelling mistakes (not mistakes in diction or anything like that just spelling) 2. hasn't shown the status screen just described it (you can just add it in as a picture in the comments if that makes it easier) Over all I really like it and will be reading it going forward even if the 2 cons aren't fixed/changed. Good luck with this story author. Here's a pic I like.

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Harry potter: A Slytherin''s Story

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