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ChakrasTiger

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger22d
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    Mushoku Tensei, the alternate route of Rudeus
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    *wrote this after just 2 chapters were posted* So far it has been pretty good. The only real complaint I have is the massive amount of misspellings(??). More like using the wrong word for the sentence. Like after you write it you just use autocorrect and don't go back to reread it. Smile instead of small, fore instead of fire, and self instead of shelf just to name a few. Honestly pretty good start so far just correct the spelling. Good luck with this story(I'm not dropping). Thought this meme was relevant.

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    Pokemon: A New Journey (Up for adoption)
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    *disclaimer* only read to chapter 2 as of writing this review. Pros: 1.intersting way of adding system into the story 2.the system is nice and simple(hate overly complicated systems especially talking ones) Cons: 1.quite a few spelling mistakes (not mistakes in diction or anything like that just spelling) 2. hasn't shown the status screen just described it (you can just add it in as a picture in the comments if that makes it easier) Over all I really like it and will be reading it going forward even if the 2 cons aren't fixed/changed. Good luck with this story author. Here's a pic I like.

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    Harry potter: A Slytherin''s Story
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    Ch 6 Another Notice Sorry
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    Steven Universe with the gamer system
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    Future Gohan Maybe? (obviously with an arm)

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    Jasper and garnet

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    The nurse seeing* my* state also shed some tears trying to calm* me but I cried for some minutes before* falling* asleep.

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    RISE OF THE DRAGON: HARRY POTTER
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    I could hear * someone (remove the the)

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    RISE OF THE DRAGON: HARRY POTTER
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    He is* warm and stable.

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    voices telling her* to 'push' (it's easier to put a pound sign * instead of typing out what you put after the correction so I'll just write out the right way to do it and a pound sign* after the word or words I changed/added from now on)

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    RISE OF THE DRAGON: HARRY POTTER
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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    pull on my body not pull to my body (maybe you meant something diffrent and I'm wrong)

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    darkness not drakness

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    By then not my then

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    ones not once

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    put a the before ability

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    try to make sentences that aren't redundant ex. Then I want infinite mana and the ability to make anything the only limit would be my imagination. (you don't have to list out what it can do if it can do anything)

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    want not what

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
    Commented

    I assume the light meant he didn't like the original not did(could be wrong though)

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  • ChakrasTiger
    ChakrasTiger6mth
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    Wouldn't instead of would

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