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Review Detail of Forlorn_Soldier in Shadow Slave

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Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv152mthForlorn_Soldier

I started this story when Guilty3 was just an upstart competing for a Spirity Award. It wasn’t too bad in the beginning, but as it devolves into a power fnatasy the author’s lack of real world experience quickly begins to torpedo the story especially when combat and military affairs are involved. If you are into simps, slavery and the main character getting NTR’d because the author keeps writing himself into a corner then this is the story for you. If not then I would avoid this at all costs because this is one of the most toxic fan communities I have ever come across on the entire internet including 4chan and Reddit.

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Shadow Slave

Guiltythree

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XlegendX
XlegendXLv14XlegendX

Feel like I missed something wasn’t Effie Kai’s romantic interest not mc’s can’t remember there relationship being like that more of roommates than love interests

Will_Treaty1:he is not, although SPOILER: Effie did get with some dude off screen.
XlegendX
XlegendXLv14XlegendX

Is the mc getting ntr’d recent ? I stoped reading at tomb of Ariel

Will_Treaty1
Will_Treaty1Lv1Will_Treaty1

he is not, although SPOILER: Effie did get with some dude off screen.

XlegendX:Is the mc getting ntr’d recent ? I stoped reading at tomb of Ariel
Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

It is part of that arc.

XlegendX:Is the mc getting ntr’d recent ? I stoped reading at tomb of Ariel
Grey_returned
Grey_returnedLv14Grey_returned

Effie often make s*xual jokes toward mc and he gets embarrassed because he finds her very attractive and is a virg*n however she just teasing him like a popular girl would do to a nerd idk if would consider this ntr, I find weird but the author really seems to get off on this dynamic

XlegendX:Feel like I missed something wasn’t Effie Kai’s romantic interest not mc’s can’t remember there relationship being like that more of roommates than love interests
Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

It’s up to you if you want to keep reading, but I don’t have any interest in immersing myself into this world again.

Grey_returned:Effie often make s*xual jokes toward mc and he gets embarrassed because he finds her very attractive and is a virg*n however she just teasing him like a popular girl would do to a nerd idk if would consider this ntr, I find weird but the author really seems to get off on this dynamic
Grey_returned
Grey_returnedLv14Grey_returned

Don’t get me wrong I don’t consider this novel peak but I also believe in finishing a novel before having a complete valid opinion on it I also like to read solely for the experience even if the mc isn’t my fav character and I have my personal critiques

Forlorn_Soldier:It’s up to you if you want to keep reading, but I don’t have any interest in immersing myself into this world again.