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This story is a great adventure. The author's strong command of English (unlike most on this platform) along with a beautifully crafted world make this one of my favorite reads.Unfortunately, there is one thing that has left me disappointed... There is no romance! If there was any romance at all, the story could have been so much better! A little more tension between the leads with a few embarrassing moments and some very occasional slice of life fluff between the lead's harrowing adventures would have made this my favorite story of all time. It would have added another dynamic that could play out so interestingly. One scene is particular (ch. 806 I think?) could have been so much better!Granted, I am extremely biased towards the romance genre. In my ideal world, every single story should have a romantic subplot.Mostly, my disappointment comes from the story have a romance tag (and no romance after 800 chapters). I hope so!Regardless, this is an extremely personal take. Author, great job. You have written a great story.

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laylag145
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Right? After reading this, I was surprised to see the Romance tag on this story. If it is going to happen, it’s extremely slow burn. Which is fine with me. The pairing being set up… needs extremely delicate handling to not become toxic.

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Thank you! :]