Good story, but sadly the main character starting background doesn't fit well with his attitude. How can he still even remain nice when he lives in the slum/outer area experiencing what it is to live by himself? i dont know why you even added that background, should have just been a foster kid, but an outcast of the foster home where he was only given the minimum to live, helps explain even a bit of his attitude & mindset.
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