Review Detail of Marco_Ferra_6964 in Shadow Slave
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i start by apologizing for possible error, i don't speak very well english. I like the worldbuilding and the writing quality, te worldbuiling is very different from other novel and it is very pleasant. The story is a bit slow but it's okay, the real problem is the MC, in the second volume he is pratically a side character and became like a literal slave, he follows like a puppy one of the female mc and do everything she asks him to do without complaining. She seems like more the MC than the MC himself and furthemore everything she does end up always well for her and she always ends up surviving in impossible situations and it doesn't make sense to me, she is like a god compared to the others of her level and the MC himself, and her flaw isn't even that bad compared to other flaws despite her power is insanely strong and useful. total score 3.6
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His English is good enough to understand what's happening. Sunless keeps getting outshined by Changing Star. The author is a decent writer, but he doesn't know everything. You don't build side characters by swapping their role with the main character. Sunny seems like a third wheel sometimes. Sunny and Nephis are about the same age too. The MC should surpass his peers at some point.
Ashutosh_Parmar_8716:well the reason you didn't like this đKoh-i-Noor is that you are not well-versed in english that's why you were unable immerse in this story perfectly and as for me i am just completely obsessed with this black opal. [img=recommend]