Review Detail of KING_IN_YELLOW in Black Clover : The Last Legacy
Review detail
writing quality: 3 star, there are mistakes here and there and the writing style are clearly that of a newbie at writing so it's 3 star, I've seen worse story development: 1 star I would originally put 3 star at first but when the mc joins the black bulls I already know it will be just like the other ff, you know there are a few black clover ff out there and almost everyone joins black bulls so almost every single one became the typical "woot-why did he choose black bull?! then became strong and the other team/knights be like "hes just a commoner blah blah" then the captain of the team would scold them Yeah character design: 3 star not bland enough to be 1-2 star and not unique enough to be 4-5 star(unique in a sense that he's different from the other mc in other black clover fic they are mostly the same). updating stability: 4 stars it has a daily update of 1 chap a day, (5 stars are for the novel with 2+update daily, still depends on how long a single chapter is) world background: 2 star it's okay alot of time skips here and there, it could be better if the author explain the world a bit more and how characters interact in the background not just "wow that guy stronk"etc. overall 2.6 stars, I would give it higher if the author is a bit more creative and join the other knight guard/team and make a different plot instead of following the og story.
Black Clover : The Last Legacy
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I think why they do that is because the story revolves around Asta and the black bull. if he joins the other team then the author is forced to create a new story and it could be hard if you don't know how to tell a fun, exciting and action-adventure story. it's easy if you have something to go off with.
KING_IN_YELLOW:and pls delete the spammer guy review he vote like 5 reviews with 5 stars
I'm now going to review your review because I'm bored and felt like it world background: it's quite literally a fanfic it should already more or less be known as long as one reads/watches the content it's based on plot: honestly just seems like your personal bias tbh because regardless of how many people do similar things it doesn't always mean it's done the same way won't argue with character design because honestly it's a matter of opinion and I haven't even read the book same with writing quality since again I haven't read it and well your way of judging update stability is just stupid it quite literally says update stability not update rate meaning if it updates at the rate promised it should be 5 stars since its perfectly stable and update speed is not even something people ought to complain about especially if they want quality content which takes time to make i find the idea of people pushing authors to release chapters faster idiotic I get that people want to read more but they ought to understand stuff takes much longer to make than to consume