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Forbidden_Library
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It's seriously a shame that this is dropped, this story is criminally underrated and has by far the most unique premise I've ever seen in a fanfic. It starts of confusing but the more that I kept reading it the more it made sense what was happening, like piecing together a jigsaw puzzle. It has the element of mystery, and gives us questions that we want to find out about. Why are characters being controlled by the player? How comes they don't remember anything. Why does the main character remember? Why can they hear the Player who's controlling them? Instead of the traveller being a character, he is more of a force of nature. A powerful hurricane that cannot be stopped and leaves destruction in its wake. This chaotic element actually makes the story more fun, in my opinion, rather than boring. Another aspect is the main character's weakness. He is a flawed character with not much power but there's room to grow because of that. Other readers seem to hate the MC and therefore the story because of it. But just because the character is flawed doesn't mean the story is. Look at Subaru from Re:zero. He's a flawed character with little to no physical power but he uses his knowledge from previous attempts to his advantage. I love that the Mc has been trying different methods despite him being weak. Making deals with the knights of favonius, trying to get a contract with Zhongli. It'll be interesting to see how he overcomes this hurdle. Honestly, author, if you're reading this I would recommend publishing this on Fanfiction .net or Ao3. More people would appreciate it there. I think what makes many dislike the story here is that they're used to fast stories with overpowered main characters. So when a story has an mc that is weak and flawed they will drop it. But if you don't want to continue the story, I respect your wishes. Thanks for writing these 47 chapters, I've really enjoyed them.

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Summoned as a Genshin Character

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Renegade_Universal
Renegade_UniversalAuthorRenegade_Universal

Hey, author here. I am... speechless... with your comment. Just, wow. As you could tell, I am an amateur autor. This was just my second attempt at writing a story, and I honestly was just writing for fun. I tried to make everything as realistic and connected as I could, but it really is a tough job haha. Seriously, don't ever underestimate how difficult writing can be. I greatly appreciate your comment, Mr. Library. I thought this work was but a ridiculous attempt at professional story-telling, given the poor reactions and reviews, but I'm glad I managed to get something through to you (and some several others too). So thank you for reading it and leaving a review. As for why I dropped it, simply a matter of destiny, to put it bluntly. Although from time to time I wish I had the available time to come back and write some more. I find that quite unlikely to happen, but if it does, it is mainly because of comments like yours, so don't stop them from coming hahaha. After months away, I finally felt the desire to write something new. Or rather, to add onto my ever-growing list of stories to write in the future. Don't know what's going to happen next, but I hope fate permits our next encounter soon. Best regards, Bruno V.

Forbidden_Library
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For a second attempt its really great! I have nothing but respect for authors, as someone who tried to write before it's insanely hard and time consuming. Sometimes it might feel like what you're writing isn't good enough but the fact that you actually posted chapters makes you way ahead of the curve. Thanks for replying. I look forward to what you'll write in the future.

Renegade_Universal:Hey, author here. I am... speechless... with your comment. Just, wow. As you could tell, I am an amateur autor. This was just my second attempt at writing a story, and I honestly was just writing for fun. I tried to make everything as realistic and connected as I could, but it really is a tough job haha. Seriously, don't ever underestimate how difficult writing can be. I greatly appreciate your comment, Mr. Library. I thought this work was but a ridiculous attempt at professional story-telling, given the poor reactions and reviews, but I'm glad I managed to get something through to you (and some several others too). So thank you for reading it and leaving a review. As for why I dropped it, simply a matter of destiny, to put it bluntly. Although from time to time I wish I had the available time to come back and write some more. I find that quite unlikely to happen, but if it does, it is mainly because of comments like yours, so don't stop them from coming hahaha. After months away, I finally felt the desire to write something new. Or rather, to add onto my ever-growing list of stories to write in the future. Don't know what's going to happen next, but I hope fate permits our next encounter soon. Best regards, Bruno V.
Renegade_Universal
Renegade_UniversalAuthorRenegade_Universal

Thank you very much! I also would like to thank you for your recommendations, I forgot to mention it before hehe

Forbidden_Library:For a second attempt its really great! I have nothing but respect for authors, as someone who tried to write before it's insanely hard and time consuming. Sometimes it might feel like what you're writing isn't good enough but the fact that you actually posted chapters makes you way ahead of the curve. Thanks for replying. I look forward to what you'll write in the future.
evilnigga666
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I've got to agree with the reviewer here. This story feels like a hidden gem and I'm liking the way you're developing this story. Should you ever decide on posting this on another platform like FFnet, I will support you all the way!