While I didn't like the concept of the MC having a system on top of being a godking I let it go since the premise was interesting. The grammer is horrendous but can be forgiven since it's not the writer's native language. The love interests are too accepting of a harem and have no good reason to love the MC. The writer doesn't have good knowledge of the DC verse, for example that time when the MC cursed Hecate by taking away her divinity and magic using the River Styx. That doesn't make sense since River Styx is only can be used as medium for swearing an oath and the fact that Hecate in the DC verse is literally magic itself and is not a part of any pantheon and is more powerful than any of them. The MC's only explanation for strength is training like a madman. He is also as unreasonable as his past-counterpart attacking Hades having genuine concern for the feasibility of his plan to breakout the cyclopes from Tartarus. You can go ahead and read it for mindless passtime.
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LIKEOk I just checked and you're right, sorry about that. But that still doesn't excuse the rest of my points.
GodOfGreedAs:oo you really think I don't have knowledge of dc that is so then what do you know about dc yes I know Hecate is a gift to humanity and Hecate is the magic embodiment but do you forget its fiction I will do it for making the story good and I know who god Is. I literally read so many comics every crisis event from Crisis on Infinite Earths to dc newest death metal don't question on my knowledge about dc or marvel and she is not magic itself she is just an embodiment of magic and never forget she is just an avatar of the original Hecate you just read a fandom and trying to teach me
oo you really think I don't have knowledge of dc that is so then what do you know about dc yes I know Hecate is a gift to humanity and Hecate is the magic embodiment but do you forget its fiction I will do it for making the story good and I know who god Is. I literally read so many comics every crisis event from Crisis on Infinite Earths to dc newest death metal don't question on my knowledge about dc or marvel and she is not magic itself she is just an embodiment of magic and never forget she is just an avatar of the original Hecate you just read a fandom and trying to teach me
for the harem, they are kids kids who lived loneliness for many many years now they got some attention and love they run for it
lovdaboi_69:Ok I just checked and you're right, sorry about that. But that still doesn't excuse the rest of my points.
did you forget he is a god-king he controls everything why do you think any primordial never attack Olympians directly they control everything
GodOfGreedAs:for the harem, they are kids kids who lived loneliness for many many years now they got some attention and love they run for it
his body adapts and evolves for his strength what do you think will happen if you break your mussels, at lightning speed and heal them at the same speed. and if forget in dc there is a book name book of destiny and in the book, everyone's future was written even Lucifer is not out of the books reach out and mc was powerful enough to defeat all of them
GodOfGreedAs:did you forget he is a god-king he controls everything why do you think any primordial never attack Olympians directly they control everything