Review Detail of Stumblmer in Family Of Ghosts

most grateful that this was a very short story. some moments/scenes are cute, some are pleasantly raunchy yet others are just meh. overall plot not great and various tools for convenience are not well thought that many holes/illogic to the point it is no longer enjoyable fiction. rush to conclude left a lot of loose ends but honestly if it didn't end, I would have dropped it. I feel nad rating writing quality when I have no idea if translation (as I believe this is not originally submitted as English work of literature) is a true representation of author's writing but there's quite a chance that it is. would not recommend.