Review Detail of DaoistDK95fH in Arrogant Young Master's Chat Group

yo fam, your story's premise is interesting but it lacks polishing, like the writing has so many mistakes I'm not a master of English myself as its my third language, but recently I have an urge to try and dip my toes in editing hit me up if you want a free editor, I can try to minimize the grammar mistakes I can't guarantee the quality doe