I'm looking forward to this novel, so far so good. The grammar is also pretty good, I liked how the novel is progressing so far. What I hope is that you don't screw the MC up that bad in progression. Overall it is a good story so far.
zLucasH
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LIKEThank you brother, I always intend to keep the idea I initially had for mc, he may have some change of perspective throughout the story, like every protagonist. And regarding grammar, every chapter I reread, I try to keep the scores correct, but something or other can go unnoticed as English is not my main language, I would appreciate it if you can notify me as soon as you see one, which I will correct as soon as possible. thank you very much for the feedback
zLucasH:Thank you brother, I always intend to keep the idea I initially had for mc, he may have some change of perspective throughout the story, like every protagonist. And regarding grammar, every chapter I reread, I try to keep the scores correct, but something or other can go unnoticed as English is not my main language, I would appreciate it if you can notify me as soon as you see one, which I will correct as soon as possible. thank you very much for the feedback