The story is decent. Maybe because the author has written better narutofics that this one seems lower on my ratings. The character was full of plot holes, well full of is an overstatement but there was little to no character development and some plot settings seemed a bit forced. I mostly stayed my dislikes but this novel is truly not bad, I am just being harsher because the author has made better novels. Also I would also recommend checking up on grammer as it is hard to read some sentences, though it’s not that bad. It’s a decent novel. Good job Author
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