Review Detail of RuinSmith in Cultivating Eternal Divinity

Item: Cultivating Eternal Divinity
Rating: 2

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RuinSmithLv153mthRuinSmith

let me be honest this one drops off between chapters 60 and 70. I don't know what to say, but there are huge gaps in this story and I can pass some of them up as character progression but when you leave a chapter as him dying and then jump to the next chapter skipping how he survived it makes it tuff to read.

Cultivating Eternal Divinity

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MellyK9Lv15MellyK9

yeah, that had me stumped as well. I had to come check the comments to see if it was just me or if the story really did cut out some chapters. It is so jarring, one second he's dead, then suddenly it's months into the future with no conclusion or mention of the demon.

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