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RuinSmith

RuinSmith

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2018-04-01 JoinedUnited States
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1mth
    Posted

    It started of alright even with a few contradictions but the writing went down hill after 50. It says he is a farmer but doesn't have any farming skills, he doesn't even attempt to plant any herbs, and he eve has a slave workers but doesn't give them any work to do. He uses the farms as a sare space and a storage device then as a farm. The author can't even stay consistent with power levels and just randomly assign them, he forgets that he has the mc kill a sanctuary expert in front of the student body but then has him fight a legendary after telling him that there's a huge gape between the two. I give it a hard pass with poorly written plots and the author not being able to remember or maybe to lazy to double check what he had written.

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    I Planted Crops Alone After Awakening The Weakest Farmer Job Class
    Video Games · Crossover
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1mth
    Posted

    Unfortunately this turned into a terrible harem buider that is constantly poorly written with terrible grammar. the world was interesting at first but its just another clone that has turned into smutt

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    Returning From The Magic World
    Magical Realism · Dark_Crow1111
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith11mth
    Posted

    Don't buy this it says completed but its not even close. It was dropped and Webnovel is scamming peolle by saying it is completed. It literally is stopped and is no longer being translated. You can't even get ahold of the author or translation team.

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    The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World
    Magical Realism · Two Langya Brothers
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Commented

    webnovel says they only handle information and technical issues nothing else now its on the editors to give refunds. They also said that they have no way to contct the auther and have no reason to do so since they only handle information and technical issues

    Ch 1282 God’s Kingdom
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    Abe the Wizard
    Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Replied to RuinSmith

    unfortunately web novel says its on the editor to refund coins for privalged chapters that are not being posted. they wonder why people stop paying for the chapters and go for a free read website

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    Abe the Wizard
    Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Posted

    once again the writer is not keeping up with the novel 🙄 and webnovel isn't holding him accountable after still selling preferred reader chapters.

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    Abe the Wizard
    Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Posted

    Unfortunately the author stopped writing a week and a half ago shorting every one that paid for premium. This is a first and last time i pay for chapters on this site. ai refuse to pay for a half written book that is way over priced. I'll wait to see if he publishes the story.

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    Abe the Wizard
    Fantasy · The Mass of Eating Melon Seeds
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Commented

    stick to first person if you keep it in third you'll end up loosing readers

    Ch 140 Mirror World Trails
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    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern Fantasy · Biako
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Commented

    the chapters are way to short

    Ch 196 This Little Thing Looks Really Exquisite!
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    Complete Martial Arts Attributes
    Eastern Fantasy · Don't Enter The Jianghu
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Posted

    Sadly this one is a nock off but its written as a rencarnated mc. Unfortunately as of late the writer isn't keeping up with his obligations of 14 chapters a week.

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    Complete Martial Arts Attributes
    Eastern Fantasy · Don't Enter The Jianghu
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith1yr
    Posted

    The writer has good potential but he does not do enough research about the country hes trying to write the story setting in. His book literally has many errors in culture like guns being rare in the United States or businesses doing cooperations because hes too lazy to Describe the actual business transactions. At 1st the book was good and I can pass up the shotty writing but when you go through about a 130 chapters of it and you still see really glaring and I'm carrying mistakes that just make the Book unreadable in a choppy mess.

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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
    Magical Realism · Mu Jiuzhou
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Posted

    Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.

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    The Abandoned Hunter
    Martial Arts · 1st_Manga_KING
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    its hard yo read with the random changes in perspective

    Ch 18 Earth-Crushing Technique
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    The Mysterious Black Magician
    Fantasy · Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    changing pov kills the story when you just start investing into the main character. it's unfortunate that this happened when the story itself was hust picking up.

    Ch 33 Double the Trouble
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    Assassin's Concentration In Another World
    Fantasy · MonarchX
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    The smut added in every now and then is fine but it when its chapter after chapter is too much when I'm reading it for the story .

    Ch 603 Pervert
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    The Genius System Without Equal
    Magical Realism · Straw is crazy too
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    your writing style is great but greed is ro much if you think people will start paying for it already your wrong and very likely killed your reader base

    Ch 10 A Deal That Can't Be Refused
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    Ascension of the Master Assassin
    Video Games · Minimal_Effort
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    the translation is very hard on the eyes when it cant get genders right and to stop it from happening names are constantly being repeated

    Ch 57 Bai Sheng's evil plan
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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern Fantasy · DarkForces
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Posted

    Well im 200 chapters in 70 of it has been filler about skill and skill data not a hole lote of story progression for the mc or mc's because the writer jumps around from character to character perspective making it ruff to follow. The story has some major plot holes like getting rid of his dmg reduction skill then saying he needs more defensive skills. Then getting rid of the ai for the system but still has ai by turning into a fairy??? or something was never specified. Honestly their isn't any conformity in the writing style or plot. Its not bad if you can get past all of the filler but not worth 10 stones achapter.

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    I Reincarnated As A Stick
    Fantasy · TrueDawn
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  • RuinSmith
    RuinSmith2yr
    Commented

    the constant change of perspective is interrupting the flow of the story. that causes me yo skim through them. is their any hope this will stop?

    Ch 120 Deception and Courage
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    I Reincarnated As A Stick
    Fantasy · TrueDawn
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