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Review Detail of TheMasterNovice in A Sense of Wanderlust - Invincible Conqueror (AU)

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Hope this inspires the author somehow. šŸ˜‡ 1. Writing Quality 4/5 2. Story Development 4/5 3. Character Design 5/5 4. Update Stability 4/5 5. World Background 5/5 1. The Writing Quality is alright. It's not that immersive but it is good at painting a picture. Moreover, it's neither purple prose nor straight-up boring to read. 2. It's rather slow-paced, to be honest. But besides that, it's all good. 3. The MC is a chill character. I like how he isn't stupidly domineering nor whiny (like some transmigrated/reincarnated MCs out there), and the fact that he's from an intergalactic imperial lineage in his previous life tells me that he might pull off something big later on and maybe even rule an empire greater than his own even though he shows clear indifference in that idea. 4. Update Stability is nonexistent right now, but back then the updates were pretty frequent so I'll give you that. šŸ¤£ 5. The World Background is kinda insane. I respect that you removed the "a backwater region in a backwater region trope" trope, and how the Great Fiendgod War would play a role in the story (unlike in original story). Also, making the Golden Dragon Emperor a top-tier expert in the Mortal World-wide story is cool. However, I think that would bring a lot of headaches to the author since there would be lots of gaps to fill. Regardless, I really really love the World Background. Honestly, the author should just create an original novel. This and his other stories show potential.

A Sense of Wanderlust - Invincible Conqueror (AU)

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