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who said anything about veganism? vegetarian and vegan food are different
it just adds to the charm
it's literally a bloodline ability in Food Wars
Yes.
Of course everyone knows that. But Shinomiya and Eishi are from completely different generations, their generation is at least a decade apart. Also, the 1st Seat (like all the seats) are constantly changing - The way you worded your comment implies that it took at least a decade for a new 1st Seat to appear.
Alright. Calm down, Epstein Uchiha. 😵💫😖🤢🤮💀
That is fanfiction material.
I doubt that, TBH. While civilians hire ninjas to do various jobs, there are still cheap and/or poor people that would be more than glad to use alternatives for explosive tags such as gunpowder. Gunpowder most likely exists, it's just that it's not that useful against ninjas.
Writing Quality 4/5: There are minor grammar mistakes, but they are very miniscule.Story Development 4/5: Personally, until we reach the Draconic Ruins Realm, then I doubt that the path would diverge too much from TDG's plot.Character Design 4/5: Fairly intelligent. Too slow of a cultivation though. I also wished he was more cunning.Updating Stability 4/5: This is based on how your updates back then.World Background 4/5: I normally score TDG fanfics with 3/5-stars since they don't really delve into world-building. However, you added your own flare into this and it's decent.
Tang San has no proper life experience as an adult in his previous life. All he knows is the Tang Sect. It's really annoying when people like the translator talk about Tang San's idiotic perspective without understanding how he developed his perspective; it just shows how hypocritic they are regarding that.
What happened to the Profound Flame Demonic Tiger's Spirit Ring?
On average, the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon probably is the Mainland's Strongest Beast Spirit.
this epitomizes the: "intelligent mc"-tag
it's fictional, get over it
Writing Quality 4/5: It's decent. Stability of Updates 4/5: For when he was still active. Story Development 3/5: It's alright. Character Design 3/5: The MC is just alright. World Background: I don't why you have Japanese names in a universe where the universal language is Chinese. English names are fine as well since they appeared in the story, but Japanese names? Hell nah. You should've just stuck with the Chinese language.