I had to stop after chapter 5. By then MC was a totally a idiot. What broke it for me was MC goes to his job after not calling in for about 3-4 days not getting fired there? So MC goes into room to clean but instead eats an drinks the wine meant for someone else? That is just there to cause conflict. That's why I stop forcing plot isn't the way to write a good story.
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