Review Detail of Mario_Alonso in MHA: Power's Of Redo Of Healer
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The story is full of plot holes. First things first, he encounters Nezu when he had just escaped from the lab that experimented on him. So, I thought that MC was all mights age or older as nezu was already principle when all might enters UA. Afterwards we are shown that all might is already a pro hero which doesnt make sense. anyways, after this we are introduced to a lot of conviniently placed charcters that shoulndt be where they are right now like toga himiko who was atending aldera high with midoriya and bakugou, because yes, MC is in fact in midoriya's age group another plot hole. additionally, we can see gale force attending aldera high as well because they were in the same orphanage. once again it doesnt make sense. gale force was born in yamanashi prefecture while izuku was born in shizuoka prefecture. characters besides mc seem dumb and the world background is inconsistent as well. positive things about the novel are that: it is readable and the updating stability is good enough.
MHA: Power's Of Redo Of Healer
Siebog
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Honestly, thank you for your constructive criticism, normally when people leave a bad review they usually just say its bad then type 20 emotes but I can respect someone reading everything then giving a review. I also understand all your points and can see where the story frustrates you, and will try to improve my writing, character development, and world building thank you.
hello author, the first few chapters were really good (up to chap 4). i hope to see you write something similar but with an older mc, i think you would do a good job. additionally it would address some problems, like morals or ethics of having what is conceptually an adult in a kids body. (all of this applies only if you want to create your own plot. you could also try a more 18+ plus take on the novel where facts are irrelevant). anyways have a nice day handsome author.
Siebog:Honestly, thank you for your constructive criticism, normally when people leave a bad review they usually just say its bad then type 20 emotes but I can respect someone reading everything then giving a review. I also understand all your points and can see where the story frustrates you, and will try to improve my writing, character development, and world building thank you.
Siebog:Honestly, thank you for your constructive criticism, normally when people leave a bad review they usually just say its bad then type 20 emotes but I can respect someone reading everything then giving a review. I also understand all your points and can see where the story frustrates you, and will try to improve my writing, character development, and world building thank you.
Siebog:Honestly, thank you for your constructive criticism, normally when people leave a bad review they usually just say its bad then type 20 emotes but I can respect someone reading everything then giving a review. I also understand all your points and can see where the story frustrates you, and will try to improve my writing, character development, and world building thank you.