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Honestly, it started as one of the best pokemon fanfics in this website. The author didn’t give boons to his protagonist, the later is likeable and not a complete moron. The grammar is also very good....but (there is always a but ) the story contain one the deadliest poisons in writing; other reincarnated characters. Many authors tried, yet they all failed to implement it properly. They either annoy the readers who already grew attached to the protagonist, or are just more interesting than him (so we’d rather hear their story, not his). Authors usually drop their fanfics when they do it, and i’d rather drop it now when i remember it fondly than wait and see it turn out for the worst. Anyway, if you don’t like other reincarnators, don’t read it. If you're okay with it, then go ahead. You’ll like it. Good luck author. I hope you’ll write other stories, you’ve got talent.
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Blur182
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There are some multi-reincarnator stories that work, but the premise of those stories is already that multiple people will reincarnate or have already reincarnated, but it is usually followed by distinguishing MC in some way, eg. he gets a system, power, is lucky(gets a head start in some way), otherwise there is no reason why other people wouldn't be as advanced as him or even more advanced than him.
Yup, but the whole point of Arifureta is that a whole class got transmigrated. And his luck sucked so much we couldn’t help but root for him. Here it’s about a reincarnated guy having a good time living in the pokemon world.
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DaoistyQNGiX:Multi reincarnated character fics are always a drop for me so thank you for the heads up!
Then make interesting OC still from the setting, nobody wants to read about other reincarnators. What a turn off.
Blur182:thx mate but can I say, that they're only there to have more depth on the world?
curious, what's wrong with it? idk about other stories but the only reincarnator besides the mc in this story is just some loser (like he is worse in every way) in the background on the other side of the world
AizenJabberwock:Then make interesting OC still from the setting, nobody wants to read about other reincarnators. What a turn off.
Unless it's part of the premise(Global Game by Gods/MC hunting "MCs") or part of Source Material, "Other Reincarnators"(transmigrators, regressors etc) just detract some points from MC's "uniqueness". In best case, that is. In worst cases, they are often play roles of Mary-Sue-OC or OP-OC-Villains™. TL:DR - nothing bad per se by itself, but people with enough experience just look with negative prejudice.
Khyrrid:curious, what's wrong with it? idk about other stories but the only reincarnator besides the mc in this story is just some loser (like he is worse in every way) in the background on the other side of the world
