Review Detail of privateboa4 in The Novel's Outsider

Item: The Novel's Outsider
Rating: 1.8

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privateboa4Lv12yrprivateboa4

The Grammer is horrible you can barley make out any the sentences. The Grammer errors could be minor but it still annoys me this person seems like a 9 year old with this Grammer

The Novel's Outsider

Arsene_Lionheart

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privateboa4Lv1privateboa4

I highly doubt English isn't your frist language the way you cary your words is definitely is American English. The reason I was writing this is because it seemed like a good find but the Grammer just annoyed me. this is because all new novels on this site are written by kids who can't write properly.

Arsene_Lionheart:bro, i already told you its my first novel and english is not my first language so, if you don't like it, don't read simple

2yr

Arsene_LionheartAuthorArsene_Lionheart

bro, i already told you its my first novel and english is not my first language so, if you don't like it, don't read simple

2yr

Arsene_LionheartAuthorArsene_Lionheart

nope bro, i am in french, i started to write for fun, anways thanks for your comment, i see what i can change

2yr

privateboa4Lv1privateboa4

I know I was rude Wich I am sorry for I am a Grammer nerd and I hate Grammer errors if you need help fixing the Grammer I would help since I think your book has potential

Arsene_Lionheart:nope bro, i am in french, i started to write for fun, anways thanks for your comment, i see what i can change

2yr

Arsene_LionheartAuthorArsene_Lionheart

it ok, thanks for your proposition, if you can it will be good because i definetly need a help

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