Review Detail of Kenrio in Pokemon Reincarnation System

I loved the unique stein and the comedy is pretty funny. but the fic is full of grammatical mistakes and break the immersion most of the times. other than the mc all other character are extremely annoying and make difultty to read without hating them,the worse are the AI that make me want to stop read in many times because of her but because she don't appear to much it's tolerable. the one most irritating is risa she is extremely bossy, rude and annoying and for some reason mc take her as his mate( I nearly stopped read in here) another thing I dont like is how much time mc waste being a ratatta completely unecessary author could simple skip but not he goes and make a complete complex plot for mc first life as ratatta I found this extremely unbelievable how high is the level and potential of useles Pokemon like ratatta line and sparrow line even more so when we're talking about the begining of the fic, author already to much information in to little time making a exhaustive read. I really hope he edit and Smith out the chapter and many ridiculous thing that happen. something like a Pokemon with the power to strength the soul and even choose the talent of his offspring should be something coming from a lousy ambipom and a conspirance to kill Pokemon of route all in the first 15 chapters of the fanfic.