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Honestly the story is just the author's self insert power trip with his instant mastery ability being fine as long as he played the MC's personality right... he did not. At this point in the story he just seems arrogant for no reason even though all the power he has was given to him. We never see anything that would make him special except for a sob story as the beginning and he immediately acts like a mere child with how much he likes to show off. Overall it could have been good if the main character was more scheming and more explorative in this world he was in and more cautious but instead he is the average wuxia protagonist with less than 2 brain cells. But if you like OP self inserts with no real plot then go on ahead.

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In Harry Potter With Instant Mastery

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wow, how smart, you were able to create a perfect summary of my book, except completely wrong