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Zoron_Mind2yrPostedHonestly the story is just the author's self insert power trip with his instant mastery ability being fine as long as he played the MC's personality right... he did not. At this point in the story he just seems arrogant for no reason even though all the power he has was given to him. We never see anything that would make him special except for a sob story as the beginning and he immediately acts like a mere child with how much he likes to show off. Overall it could have been good if the main character was more scheming and more explorative in this world he was in and more cautious but instead he is the average wuxia protagonist with less than 2 brain cells. But if you like OP self inserts with no real plot then go on ahead.
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Does the author not know what emergency means?
Su Hao was instantly dumbfounded. This strike of his was considered to be an emergency strike and it only contained 50% of his strength at most. However, merely this 50% of his strength had directly slashed the Gale Wolf and this caused him to be slightly shocked. - Zoron_Mind2yrPosted
Raws?
This book has been deleted. - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to CRIST3
Your a god I hope there are more people like you
This book has been deleted. - Zoron_Mind2yrCommented"I'm not mistaken." Liu Yu interrupted Fang Yi's words. "Everyone is avoiding me like a plague now. Only you still dare to come over. That's enough." Seeing that Fang Yi still wanted to decline, Liu Yu whispered:
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There is so many things wrong with that it is insulting but I will explain why because I am bored 1. He did not gain his wealth using his intelligence and legit nobody even the dumbest person in the world could become as wealthy as him if the same thing happened, 2. he was a poor person less than a day ago and he is legit insulting himself considering he is not a real rich person, 3. For all he knows his computer could stop mining bitcoin and he still spent 2/3 of his money on a car.
Liu Yu couldn't be bothered to lower himself to his level. It was even a little shameful to be calculative with such a poor person! - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to SuperHippo
yes people are hypocrites
"This son of a bitch is already dead! This bastard is next!" - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to Theoritizer
Well most people are stupid nowadays why do you think trolls exist
"He didn't hesitate at all. It seems that he really doesn't think of his son as a fellow human being." - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to 13th_Night
Your overestimating how much the author would care to add in a few words
Bowen hated the judge at that moment and wanted to let him have a taste of his own medicine. - Zoron_Mind2yrCommented
That's just weirdly wrong considering laws do not affect the rich i thought that was obvious
"If the law was useful, why hasn't such a scum been caught yet?" - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to N0B0DY3
*sigh* Time to get scientific I guess... it is scientifically proven that when you are in precarious situations such as this the part of your brain that processes your thoughts and makes you think straight tightens so your thoughts are more hurried and nonsensical.
The deformity of his face caused by the dissolution of his muscles was also becoming more and more evident. His face was no longer recognizable. It no longer looked like a human's face. - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to SingleLemon
so true though
However, as a viewer who had been watching livestreaming videos for more than a decade, he wasn't very interested. He wasn't too curious or excited about it. He was so used to it all that he was even tired of watching videos on Pornhub. - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to Mario_Alonso
Death Inquisitor
Death Notice! - Zoron_Mind2yrCommented
Just imagine he gets "Body Talent: Level (Trash)"
Random talent: give the user a random talent with a random level - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to Shsl_Pervert
My name is Bob Uchiha and I will kill a certain someone
Name: Bakorio Uchiha. - Zoron_Mind2yrReplied to JimmyBlah
Baka
'So this kid's name is Bakorio huh? Fine since this is a new start in life for me I will keep using this name to honor your life too' he thought when suddenly he heard a *beep* in his head and saw a panel with a notification appear in front of him which he read with a surprised look. - Zoron_Mind2yrPosted
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