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Review Detail of BigBoyJenkins in Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

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BigBoyJenkins
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First lets say the whole rebirth thing is very stupid and definitely only plays a part in like 2 chapters( as of this review ive read about 180 chapters of about 300ish)Translations, are absolutely garbage, names for things change so much that i have forget what currency or stones or whatever that they need. Also the story will have a requirement of needing 10,000 energy crystals, and 10 magic crystals for an upgrade, but then three chapters later, need 20,000 energy crystals and 5 magic crystals for the same upgrade( mc already had some, but mysteriously didn’t mention it as if he didn’t have any) so he had to search again or fight for more. Also author will complete forget certain beasts or character in character territory just to weaken the mc.Feels very rushed in a lot if spots because of this.

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Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start

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AzureConqueror
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I also stopped for similar reasons. The author obviously didn't plan before writing. He always tried to limit mc's strength and wouldn't pay attention to troops leveling up and increasing in tier (which is the point of the novel) and would rarely show it in the novel except for the few times the author felt the need to power up the mc and then mention their level or increased tier.